Monday, October 11, 2010
bordo's 3rd comment
this particular comment presented by Bordo doesn't convey or relate to the massage depicted in my ad. Bordo is talking about how unmanly it looks to show his body in an attractive way.meaning he is not suppose to be surveyd by women,let alone men. i do believe men are being accepted in society as an artistic embodiement of beauty.
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In –class/ Blog Post#1: Deutsch’s Male Privilege
ReplyDeleteYes he poseted on time and everyhting is clear and apropriate to the assignment.
In-class comment on Bordo’s quote
He was late on this you should have done it earlier. But you responded well to the quote though.
Blog Post #2: Formal Outline for Paper #1: Ad Analysis
Yes you have done it and on time and the outline is well thought out and follows the order of format.
Comment/Response to classmate’s outline
You commented on mine and I found that really helpful thanks alot and It was comment withed the date given.
Blog Post#3: First Draft of Paper #1: Ad Analysis
YOu have analysed well and and I see the essay that follws you really fixed it up.
Peer Reviews of two classmates’ first drafts using Peer Review questions
Again you commented on mine and perhaps another person? I found all your comments very helpful thanks alot.
Final Draft of Paper #1: Ad Analysis
I see the final project paper asn I am shocked really well written and comprehensive. On time and posted.
Very well kept up blog Guadia.